My dearest father

I love my father more than anyone else.

MY DEAREST FATHER 

I have written several things for my mother,

I equally admire and love you more than her father.

I am not afraid to unveil my past,

Oh! Father your place in my heart is vast.

I had no mother since years,

She left me and I was in tears.

You were the one who took care of me father,

You turned all my tears to laughter.

Every night I woke you up,

But you never said anything to me.

Every day I created fuss,

But you bared all my tantrums with ease.

No one can take that place you have in my heart.

I have loved you since the very start.

I cannot imagine being away from you,

I have not loved anyone else more than you.

I lack words to say what all you have ever done for me,

You were my mother too,

You took care of me like she would do.

But she was not with me,

You have filled her love by loving me from her side too.

I always want to see you happy,

No one can ever do what you have done for me,

You are the best in the world,

You are best in whole history.

I am sorry for every pain I have caused you,

I am in tears father,

I cannot imagine losing you.

Reviews

[writ rajat]

very nice dedication to ALL the fathers

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. ☺ Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it.

[iamshadowine]

wow! quite a touching and powerful poem! i loved reading it :)
a father is the most influential person in one's life!

keep writing :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right. Thank you so much.... :)

[Arjun Singh]

The beginning and the end were, I feel, really powerful
Good job..!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am feeling truly happy to know that you liked it ☺

[tim.reed]

This is very sweet. He sounds like a great man.

[Najam Us Saher]

Indeed he is...☺ Thank you so much

[Ardra]

Wonderful tribute to your father...
Some day I would like to pendown something for him...he is gone long back now...appreciate and love them when they are with us....once they are gone we will always miss them

[Najam Us Saher]

I feel so sad to hear about your dad. I am sure wherever he is he is looking to you from there. Thank you so much.

[Ardra]

yes, he looks after me that i know .. and he was and is the best dad :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Every daughter feels that his dad is the best. ☺

[Ardra]

thats why they say daughters are daddys girls

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....correct...

[Jimmy Yetts]

A decidedly heartfelt tribute, Narjam.
Your love for and devotion to your father is powerfully expressed.
Lovely read!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your words ☺

[AshlynnStyx]

Very well done. I like it

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it

[Jay-LH]

This is amazing. Well done :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am feeling truly happy to know that you liked it.

[Promise N. Kulimbwa]

wow this is awesome, love it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much.

[Paul]

This is so beautiful and poignant to me personally, almost like a reflection of my own life and I am sure many others who can understand the desperate, clinging one feels when only one parent remains

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you understood what I wanted to convey.