My dearest father

I love my father more than anyone else.

MY DEAREST FATHER 

I have written several things for my mother,

I equally admire and love you more than her father.

I am not afraid to unveil my past,

Oh! Father your place in my heart is vast.

I had no mother since years,

She left me and I was in tears.

You were the one who took care of me father,

You turned all my tears to laughter.

Every night I woke you up,

But you never said anything to me.

Every day I created fuss,

But you bared all my tantrums with ease.

No one can take that place you have in my heart.

I have loved you since the very start.

I cannot imagine being away from you,

I have not loved anyone else more than you.

I lack words to say what all you have ever done for me,

You were my mother too,

You took care of me like she would do.

But she was not with me,

You have filled her love by loving me from her side too.

I always want to see you happy,

No one can ever do what you have done for me,

You are the best in the world,

You are best in whole history.

I am sorry for every pain I have caused you,

I am in tears father,

I cannot imagine losing you.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

What wonderful words of love and appreciation for your Father. He sounds a remarkable man taking on the role of both parents when your Mother left you. He has certainly taught you how to love. This is a lovely poem. A joy to read.

Chris

[Najam Us Saher]

Indeed he thought me how to love unconditionally. You have no idea how much your words meant to me, I thank you very much for reading. You made my day.

[Chris Shaw]

I am really happy to know that. Thank you sincerely.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are very kind :)

[Abraham George]

@ Chris- She love everyone including the nature unconditionally. But my prayer is nobody ever try to cheat her by faking a love.

[Chris Shaw]

You are very generous with your prayers for her. That tells me a great deal about your kindness and love. Think the best of people.

[Abraham George]

I'm not that generous. I care Najam, and love her as my little sister. Even i have written 3 poems about her.

[Chris Shaw]

You love her even though she left you. Others wouldn't be nearly that caring. It has been nice talking to you. Have a good day.

Chris

[Abraham George]

Not the poem Pretty Girl pierced my heart. its about another friend.

Najam is always with me. Daily we chat here in mails.
I wrote
Morning star,
Bon voyage,
Dear Sister.
All about Najam.

I am so happy to chat with you.

Abram Geo

[Chris Shaw]

I see Najam is your friend here. Very nice:))

[Abraham George]

Najam here friend in my profile. But actually i love her like a little sister. i really don't have any sisters.
So she is my beloved sister. One of my family. I care her like that.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is beautiful i was teary by the end, is this a true story if it is im glad your father was there for you every minute to get you through without mum there.
what a great tribute to a great father well done,
thanks for entry into my comp

[Najam Us Saher]

Indeed, it is true. Thank you very much for such kinds words for me and my father. It means a lot.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Wow....Najam... beautiful..
It is only the emotion of a poet that can rouse the emotion of the reader...and I can feel your emotion towards your father through this beautiful piece...
This is a brilliant piece...
Outstanding..
Keep writing..

[Najam Us Saher]

Sure, Thank you very much for reading this. It means a lot. I am extremely happy that my words made you feel such. ☺

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Well done!...It's really very beautiful

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

[¿]

Najam you're father must be way far more proud of you as you're for him! My each word will stand less to explain that yes, "Your father cares and loves you more than anybody existing in the world"
Had tears in my eyes while reading it!
Almighty bless you sister and your beloved father.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for such kindest words. He doesn't know that I have written this because I haven't shown him yet. I believe your words, god bless you too. You made my day.

[ElizaB]

This poem in particular reminds me of a song I wrote for my father (it's rather embarrassing when I look back on it now). But the love you feel is untarnished, and I hope it remains this way.

As always, thank you for supporting my competitions!

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you for creating them, thank you so much for reading this as well.

[Desiree O'Neal]

This was great, well said, I too love my father.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Avia]

It's a beautiful thing, the love between a parent and a child and there is nothing else that can compare to it. I can tell that you really love your father and he must feel so blessed to have a daughter who loves him so much.

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah, yes. Thank you very much Avia. I am extremely happy to know that you liked this. 😀

[Avia]

Definitely. You're always welcome. By the way, congratulations on being 2nd the short story contest. I'm happy for you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

How kind of you, thank you very much :)

[tarah morris]

This is very good. Very touching and very deep. I have the same feeling as you towards your father.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much sir. I appreciate your kind words.

[tarah morris]

Im actually a girl the man in the photo is my father but your welcome

[Najam Us Saher]

I am so sorry.
Thank you again.

[cold_hearted77]

Wowwie! I really like this.

[Najam Us Saher]

You remind me of a person. Thank you very much for reading, I appreciate it a lot.