My revised views on love

MY REVISED VIEWS ON LOVE

You might wonder what it feels like to be in love,

Oh it does feel so enchanting and happy,

But wait till love shows you its true colours,

You will feel like its a sacred sin.

When firstly touched by the poison of love,

It doesn't affect a thing,

But as the time grows,

You might want to break those strings.

For all those who are happy in love are happy and blessed,

For all those who feel love is a sweet poison it is a curse.

It doesn't take time for love to change your views about it,

Love is just a lovely word, 

Pray that you don't get touched by it. 

Life is a lie if you believe love to be a happy ending one,

Journey of love will drive you crazy and will leave you feeling none.

Open your eyes before a heartbreak does,

Is love true or just a curse?

Reviews

[Melinda McQueen]

I know this feeling of heartache.
Maybe, just maybe, you will find someone who will make you want to revise your revised view.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah I just hope so...
Thank you so much for reading :) I appreciate it

[iamshadowine]

"sacred sin,
poison of love"
Excellent oxymorons!
I like how the flow continues till the end!

keep writing :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺ Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. I liked the honest thoughts and statements.
"Open your eyes before a heartbreak does,
Is love true or just a curse?"
Love is a blessing and a curse. If I had the wisdom of the old man(I'm now). I would of loved more and drank less. Work less and danced with lover more. A curse or blessing. Love is the best days. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree with your views Sir. Thank you so much I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺

[Darling]

I love the raw emotion in this piece. Love is both and it is like a swing you go up and down. Thanks for sharing what seems your real emotions of love. Darling.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. You've made me happy 😀

[Ashe Conten]

Absolutely lovely and very true

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺

[Darren K. Jackson]

Love is a mysteriously beautiful thing that oftentimes, no words can truly describe what we want to say or what we feel. Love the passion and emotion put into your words. Always speak from the heart and not the mind.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are absolutely right Sir. I appreciate your words. Thank you

[Manu]

I think few things depend on our destiny and experiences..like is love true or curse ? True love if experienced once, it is an ultimate bliss even if it is painful, Saher :-) Nice.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. I agree with you. ☺ Thank you so much :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Interesting. Love is an experience. Some get off with it blessed while some have to face the curse of it.
I enjoyed reading this. Nicely penned :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh! Thank you so much for your kind words and visit. I appreciate it truly. ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! A pleasure :)

[Giulia King]

"Is love true or just a curse?" Love it

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad to know that you liked it. Thank you :)

[Threads]

A more bitter view on the matter than I would attribute myself. Still I would say that if you have been mindful in what kind of a person you love, then it is always worth the pain. Always :)
-Threads

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree with you. Thank you so much :)