Late night cravings
A Poem by
Najam Us Saher
Anything to eat
(First attempt to write something different)
LATE NIGHT CRAVINGS
I scan the entire kitchen,
I look what's inside the fridge,
Oh this hungriness is making me mad,
Not finding anything good to eat is making me sad.
I search the cabinets,
I search the fridge again hoping that anything appears magically,
That's when all the delicious things cross my mind,
And not a single thing I find.
I wish I find some cake,
Or fries would do,
I wish I find atleast some chips,
Or a burger would be good.
I will be the happiest if I find some ice cream,
But there is nothing,
I hope I eat a lot tonight in my dream.
© 2017 Najam Us Saher
Reviews
The emptiness of a craving gone unfulfilled.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Yeah....I didn't eat in my dreams too that night :(
This was a funny poem about something a lot of people do. I'm always searching for food in the middle of the night, I find I can't sleep on an empty stomach. There was some imagery mixed in with the humor I think, because I could imagine you searching your fridge like I do every night ha ha! Great poem!
Posted 7 Years Ago
This was a funny poem about something a lot of people do. I'm always searching for food in the middle of the night, I find I can't sleep on an empty stomach. There was some imagery mixed in with the humor I think, because I could imagine you searching your fridge like I do every night ha ha! Great poem!
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much I am glad to know that you liked it.
Had to laugh at your ending. Dreams just do not satisfy the stomach though. valentine
Posted 7 Years Ago
Had to laugh at your ending. Dreams just do not satisfy the stomach though. valentine
7 Years Ago
Yes you are right.
This made me hungry but satisfied my eyes, thanks for some humor.
Posted 7 Years Ago
This made me hungry but satisfied my eyes, thanks for some humor.
7 Years Ago
You're welcome. Thank you for reading.
Hahaha I love this! Made me laugh so much. I always open the fridge hoping something appears
Posted 7 Years Ago
Hahaha I love this! Made me laugh so much. I always open the fridge hoping something appears
7 Years Ago
Same is my condition. 😀 I am very happy to know that you liked it. Thank you.
This is so relatable write, Saher. Late night I usually crave for Maggi Noodles. Nice poem :-)
Posted 7 Years Ago
This is so relatable write, Saher. Late night I usually crave for Maggi Noodles. Nice poem :-)
7 Years Ago
Oh yeah me too....☺ Thank you :) I am glad you liked it.
Ohhhh OutStanding Wonderfull I Think You Have Tried To Copy My Style But It Looks Wonderfull And EnjoyAble.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Ohhhh OutStanding Wonderfull I Think You Have Tried To Copy My Style But It Looks Wonderfull And EnjoyAble.
7 Years Ago
Your style ? In what way....?
Thank you for reading.
7 Years Ago
I feel M y Style Here So I Said............
7 Years Ago
What's your style?
7 Years Ago
Yar I feel SO I SAid I feel Its My Story teeling Style OR Writing Style Dont Fight Saher.........
7 Years Ago
I am not.....
7 Years Ago
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hahaha, that's how i feel everytime when i go to my kitchen at night! this is what I face everyday, yet somehow i didn't even thought of putting it together into a poem!
great work!
keep writing :D
Posted 7 Years Ago
hahaha, that's how i feel everytime when i go to my kitchen at night! this is what I face everyday, yet somehow i didn't even thought of putting it together into a poem!
great work!
keep writing :D
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much :) I am glad that it was relatable.
Haha, well that's interesting, eat a lot in dreams...
Posted 7 Years Ago
Haha, well that's interesting, eat a lot in dreams...
Haha, very interesting one and I'm a foodie so I like it more than anyone😂
Posted 7 Years Ago
Haha, very interesting one and I'm a foodie so I like it more than anyone😂
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7 Years Ago
Thank you I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺
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Added on February 28, 2017
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Najam Us Saher India
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