You were there

YOU WERE THERE 

I like to see you in my dreams,

At least there I meet you,

I wonder you miss me like I miss you,

I am lying here wide awake shedding tears,

I wonder you are sleepless there and missing me the same way,

I am all alone come and hold me tight in your arms mother,

I want to see you again in my dreams tonight.

I remember the dream of yesterday,

I couldn't believe to my eyes that you were there,

I hugged you and cried in your arms,

And now you leave me scattered today.

I can't sleep come and whisper those lullabies to me,

I weep like a child come and comfort me.

All I want is you mother,

Only you can brighten my life,

I see no way to seek you,

Please put an end to this unbearable strife.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Surya]

Deeply felt...No words to speak, as you expressed my words clearly with your pen..
Thank you for sharing..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words :) I am feeling very happing to know that you liked it.

[Surya]

Your welcome..:)

[APOORVA]

i can truly connect.
at least we can meet that person in dreams

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah that is why sometimes I like dreams more than reality. Thank you for reading. :)

[Skib]

Hhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm?!?

[Najam Us Saher]

Didn't you like it ?

[Skib]

It was a statement to show I was In reflection.

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay......

[Skib]

it was a nice tribute piece :) ..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you :)

[Jenny]

this reminds me of how i felt when my grandmother passed

thank you fo sharing
J

[Najam Us Saher]

No need of thanks. I am feeling good to know that this poem was relatable.

[Jenny]

youre so sweeet :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh thank you 😊😊

[Jenny]

lol youre welcome

[Valentine]

A sad but heart touching write of how we feel when losing a parent or husband etc. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right.

[Harley Quinn]

This is a very touching poem. Well done.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

An immense suspense in the last line..i thought it was a normal poem but in the you mentioned mother..this makes the poem best..that was really really good read

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much I am glad that you liked it ☺