You were there

YOU WERE THERE 

I like to see you in my dreams,

At least there I meet you,

I wonder you miss me like I miss you,

I am lying here wide awake shedding tears,

I wonder you are sleepless there and missing me the same way,

I am all alone come and hold me tight in your arms mother,

I want to see you again in my dreams tonight.

I remember the dream of yesterday,

I couldn't believe to my eyes that you were there,

I hugged you and cried in your arms,

And now you leave me scattered today.

I can't sleep come and whisper those lullabies to me,

I weep like a child come and comfort me.

All I want is you mother,

Only you can brighten my life,

I see no way to seek you,

Please put an end to this unbearable strife.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

quote all I want is you mother only you can brighten my life unquote

beautiful

thanks so much for this good read and entering into my comp

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for creating such amazing contests :)

[Amada]

Mother ♥ ♥ ♥.
Love the way you express.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

marvelous!!i just love the way you express and write...

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am feeling truly happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure.

[Sakhiwafir]

Beautifully shows the pure bond between the child and the mother. Brilliant.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit I appreciate it. ☺

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A very heartfelt piece of writing.

There are no greater aches in the heart than those of loss and love, whether that is for family, friends or a companion. You have expressed your longing very well in this poem. Sometimes all we need is a comforting word or hug from our Mother to make everything better in our world. The pain is magnified thus, when she is absent.

A nice poem. On love, longing and the need to be comforted. Nice work.

[Najam Us Saher]

You have understood the exact meaning I wanted to convey. Thank you so much. ☺

[AshlynnStyx]

Ghosts of pain are hardly simple things. Good poem

[Najam Us Saher]

I agree. Thank you so much for reading :)

[AshlynnStyx]

You're welcome

[MaximumFlight]

Very sad and painful. Memories are forever, just like souls. They're always there, no matter what.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree with you. Memories haunt us always. Thank you for reading I am glad to know that you liked this.

[boygene borice]

A beautiful and emotional creation here. I can imagine the feeling of the persona. A mother's love is the best love i have ever had in my life.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are very lucky then. ☺ I am glad such happiness and blessing was showered on you I hope everyone realise the value of a mother and love them unconditionally. Thank you for reading my work :) I appreciate it.

[boygene borice]

Welcome. We are all meant to build each other :)

[Najam Us Saher]

That's so solacing to hear.

[boygene borice]

True. Pleasure :)

[Giulia King]

Wonderful crafted piece. We all have someone we love and miss..

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah...I agree...I am glad you liked it Thank you :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Understanding Deeply You Love And Feelings For Your Mother.........Lote Of Respect For Your Mother.......May God Make Any Situation Which Can Close Your Mother To You......

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind and consoling words. ☺

[Sikandar Khan]

WellCome....