Charming sea

CHARMING SEA 

Another day awaits me,

At a place so breathtaking,

I am near the waves of the sea,

Blessed by another morning.

Azure water shines brightly under the sun,

It provides warmth to the sea.

Playing with foam and having fun,

The waves rise with utmost efficacy.

Adoring the blue water my day has passed,

I want to behold the sight of sunset,

I wish it everlasts.

Moonlight has dominated the sky,

Into darkness the night glooms,

I am happy with the thought of the sight of a morn,

In my heart happiness blooms.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks for this wonderous poem and entering it into my competition called my other hobby. this is exquisite and took me to your place seeing what you saw thankyou

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading and sharing your honest views.

[ElizaB]

Thank you so much for entering, as always :)

Your words made me feel bright! I could feel all that you described, even the sun, despite it being almost 4.30 and darkness is against the glass of this room!

Your words are relaxing, as well as the rhythm (much like the sea) it is very fluid.

Well done :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for creating contests which I find very interesting to enter. ☺

[Najam Us Saher]

Also, thank you so much for such kind words, my heart is leaping in joy.

[David Brian]

Nice poem. I like its calmness.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. 😀

[Jasmijn]

"moonlight has dominated the sky, into darkness the night glooms" very powerful said!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. I am happy to know that you liked it :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Beautiful nature and its all you. Love to live a life, where happiness blooms.

[Najam Us Saher]

That's true. Thank you very much for reading, it means a lot :)

[Alistair (Ali)]

Great words...I think the sea pulls at us all- we would do well to heed it's call.
You reside in beautiful places.

[Najam Us Saher]

No, actually this poem is written by imagining the place I visited. I am not that lucky to live near sea or any place with such beauty. I love nature, I totally admire it. Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts, much appreciated.

[Paul Bell]

Just looking outside to the frost.
Your poem brings a nice warmth.
May the sea be tranquil.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading, it means a lot :)

[Amrita]

I could imagine whole beautiful creation in my mind while I was reading! such an amazing piece it is! loved it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. I appreciate it.

[Soumya Deouskar]

This is definitely a beautiful piece of work!
I could actually feel the whole scene around me!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that my words made you lost in that scenery. Thank you so much. ☺

[Zoya]

So refreshing! The last two lines prove to be so optimistic and make for a perfect ending. Loved it!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much Zoe. I appreciate it :)

[Zoya]

You're welcome