Seashell on the ground

SEASHELL ON THE GROUND 

Like a seashell I remain on the ground,

Some notice and pick the best ones,

While some are left around.

I feel I am the left one which no one cares about,

I have been picked once,

But thrown back to the ground.

I feel I am the worst surrounded by the best,

Like a seashell which is lying on the beach,

I feel so alone untouched and beyond one's reach.

I still feel lonely when I have everyone around,

I am diving deep in my agony,

I am waiting to be found.

Care for me before I am buried in the ground,

Otherwise I would be merely lying,

Like a seashell on the ground.

Reviews

[Amada]

Thanks najam for sharing, when I read stories like this, I feel like I have to Improve my writings a lot.
Thanks for sharing 😊😊😊😊

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you very much for reading.
Your writings are special in their own way.

[Amada]

Hihi, thanks

[Chris Shaw]

That feeling of being cast off and left alone, but hoping for change, really came through. I liked the use of that metaphor.

Chris

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much, it means a lot.

[Carla]

Oh my, this is just... Yep, I have no words. It's... Just wow, honestly. I feel the same way at times, not the best feeling, but you put it into such words that mean so much, thank you.

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah! I feel sorry to find that you feel the same but I am happy that I gave you something relatable to read. Thank you so much, your words meant a lot to me.

[Eva]

You know when you read something and it's so perfect and makes so much sense that you wish you had thought of it first? For me, that's this poem. I wish I had even half of your talent. Great job!

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh my god! You have no idea how much your words mean to me. Thank you very much from depths of my heart. You made my day and obviously made me very happy.

[sette]

wow this is an amazing write, i remember darwin out of this poem about the law of segregation.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

[sette]

you are welcome

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

congratulations you won 2nd in my freehand competition

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you very much for awarding me.

[Kiwi.jh]

This is really good! who knew Seashells were such an amazing analogy for life. This is so relatable and is an overall an amazing poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

It means a lot. Thank you so much for such insightful review.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this thanks for entering my contest winners announced next Saturday

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay. Thank you.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Seashells are beautiful no matter what - they weather the water and different seasons and tides making them stronger and withstanding- you will be chosen when time is right until then know all shall be well🌹

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right. Thank you so much for reading.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure always🌹

[z.chéri]

The comparison! I have missed reading your poetry! Always have been so amazing!
Also, i have just created a new poetry competition and i would love for you to enter it :) Looking forward to reading your submission! Keep writing!!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for letting me know about the contest and thank you very much for such sweet words. It means a lot.