Life's struggle

LIFE'S STRUGGLE

Under the shady tree I sat wondering,

What it would be like to fly like birds,

I feel so hurt when I see people with no freedom.

I see a child with her mother,

I feel so hurt thinking about those who have no one.

Places are the same with different people,

Life is the same but has different emotions.

This life is cruel and meaningless to some,

While for some they want to live it again.

Life is a blessing not a curse,

So stop living life in remorse.

It is pitiful to know time has gone in regret,

There is always a rising sun after every sunset.

Wait for your day to come,

Strive hard to achieve,

Because that's a life, it has struggle,

It is too short to stay in grief.

Reviews

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This is amazingly great.
It's a beautiful insight. Keep it up.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading. It means a lot :)

[Silmara McGarry]

Absolutely wonderful from start to the great ending!!
I really love it!
A BIG well done from me!!!
:-)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I lack words to express my happiness. Thank you for your kind words :)

[Darling]

Simply marvelous writing. I has a wonderful flow and it ends very strong. I loved you you used the concept of time in this writing because time is something we forget is limited for us. I truly enjoyed this piece. Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful piece with the world. Darling.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I agree with your opinion about time. And thank you so much again for reading and liking what I write I really feel happy from within. :)

[Darling]

It was my pleasure. I am glad you are happy from within. Darling.

[Michael S]

True, there is always a rising sun after every sunset.. I love the message and the way this is written. Life is all about living, I guess :-)
Thanks for sharing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad that you liked this poem. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Places are the same with different people,

Life is the same but has different emotions.

Well written, just wow! Above lines are the most loved...super write good meanings..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you :) I am glad you understood the meaning I wanted to convey.