This poem reminded me of some of William Blake's poetry in his collection of works 'Innocence and Experience.' Have you ever read any of his work?
He wrote a lot about green as a colour, it seemed to be a shade that spoke of nature and the joyous occasion of being young.
With this in mind, these two lines are my favourite:
Green meadows and misty rain,
I wished I stayed there forever.
As always, thank you :)
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
I have read The cradle song and Lamb by William Blake. I thank you so much for reading my poems and .. read moreI have read The cradle song and Lamb by William Blake. I thank you so much for reading my poems and creating such wonderful contests. 😀
I agree.
"To be surrounded by nature,
To be liberated from the glitches of pressure."
I need the sea, the lakes and the forest. Last place for me to know peace. Thank you Najam for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much :) I really thank you from bottom of my heart.
This reminds me of my favorite place from birth till my grandparents death, I had a place like this!
My grandparents farm was green and beautiful. My grandfather kept most of it mowed and upkept. I could walk 50 acres in my bare feet. Before it rained the leaves turning up and the smell of rain would fill my soul and nose!! Not too mention memories past and fondness of who I was. All gone now never to be relived or revisited, but brought back for a moment with this piece! Well done!! And thank you, I was able to leave this world for a moment and go back in time!
Tabby
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I feel extremely happy to make you feel such. Thank you so much for your kind words. :)
So beautiful description of nature... i too love nature and I am willing to write such poems though I do have only 3-4 poems of this type...
Very well said... honest words...
beautifully written...
Anindita
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much :) every word means a lot to me.
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