Chilly rainy night

CHILLY RAINY NIGHT

In this cold and chilly dark night,

The shower of ice cold water

Splashes on my heart,

And evokes those harsh and heart wrenching feelings,

For once which I tried to forget.

Healing wounds have just now been freshened 

With the raindrops on my heart.

I can't control myself and has to go with the flow of rain.

It seems that I have to once again bear all that terrible pain.

The pain of being away from you,

It hurts me so much,

When I recall those days,

When in such rainy days I met you.

That pain disturbs me 

So much that this very instant

I want to be with you.

I know not how many more chilly rainy nights 

I have to spend away from you.

I feel you have no such passion to feel the rain,

Trust me, it gives me hope that only after the drop of rain has fallen it is useful.

So, I believe I will live only after I fall,

But I have fallen in love with you,

Then when shall I rise?

This rain which always gave me hope and happiness,

Today, why is it a sign of demise?

Reviews

[¿]

The special thing about your rainy poems is though each are filled with pain and agony but each time these are described particularly and different from each other. Quite a hard task to choose a subject and writing more than twice about it and totally different!
You've nailed it.🔨😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah! your words made me really happy. Thank you so much :)

[ElizaB]

You tell such sad stories and yet they are beautiful.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you find beauty in my saddest tales. Thank you so much.

[SZHZIA]

A very well written poem on personal feelings, emotions comparing with nature like rain drops. rain drops wash your pain and sorrow as they clean the dust laying on leafs of flowers and trees. and how this rain gives you happiness and hope to relive. Because of this reasons the poem has fallen in love with them and that moment.
I love the following lines:
"But I have fallen in love with you,
Then when shall I rise?
This rain which always gave me hope and happiness,
Today, why is it a sign of demise?"

Nice job keep writing.

Best
szhzia

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[SZHZIA]

It is my pleasure and you are most welcome as always. :)