Angel

Light others day if you want to brighten your own.

ANGEL

Far above lived an angel,

Who had a beautiful smile;

And also made everyone smile.

Something went wrong it made the angel cry.

People said "Forget it angel, but please don't cry"

She smiled, because she doesn't want anyone to be sad coz of her.

She was living her life in blur.

Yet she smiled, because of people.

Thus, she came to be known as angel,

Who could light others day;

Even if she couldn't light her own.

She was an ideal angel living all alone.

Reviews

[Darling]

Ok, this it so powerful and it has so much truth. I recently a novel based on true events of some who could light others and light light herself. This piece very thought provoking and does make wonder of the loneliness of an angel. Darling

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I am glad to know that you liked it

[CAPOLAVORO]

This one is nice but I do believe you can make it more better than it already is.
I just needed some few more lines I guess to better create a good imaginary thought.
Anyways, write more. :) Well done.

[Najam Us Saher]

I'll think and add some more lines some day. Thank you :)

[Valentine]

Different take on one of God's creations. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you for reading :)

[wordman]

well you lit my day,enjoyed the theme

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) that's so good to hear.

[zaisham9393]

I loved the rhyme scheme.Thank you for sharing !

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. I appreciate it.

[Sikandar Khan]

Nice Poem Saher You Write Words And Turn It In Magic

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I am feeling very happy to know that you liked it.

[Sikandar Khan]

Welcome Saher Your Every Poem Is Nice I Did Not Fimd Any Your Poem Bad...hehehee

[Najam Us Saher]

Thanks for that again.....☺

[Sikandar Khan]

Welcome Again

[Sikandar Khan]

Welcome Again

[Farhan Shaikh]

Emotions are filled in this one and that makes it powerful😎..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling really happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

Why shouldn't I. Its sucha lovely poem😉

[Najam Us Saher]

😀 Thank you so much. I truly appreciate it.

[Surya]

Thank you for your request or else I would have missed it,and it was wonderfully penned....light in others life so that it brighten yours...

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh thank you so much :) I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad ending to the poetry.
"Who could light others day;
Even if she couldn't light her own.
She was an ideal angel living all alone."
The above line left the reader with sadness. To create light and can't know it. Hard place to know. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much I appreciate it. Feeling very happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Beautiful lines!!
Rhyming also adds great flow to it!
However, I think you need to use more longer and good sounding words to enhance its quality...
Overall, it's meaningful and creative :)