'People see the sunshine and say it might have rained'
It has such a beautiful meaning to it. This line will stay with me from now whenever I see a beautiful smile..
Thank you :)
Happy Writing :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your visit I appreciate it. I am feeling very happy to know that you liked it.. read moreThank you so much for your visit I appreciate it. I am feeling very happy to know that you liked it. ☺
Oh-YES! :-D
There is nothing better to overcome disappointment and pain,
to shut out the rain,
nothing to lose, everything to gain.
So, smile
for awhile.
It will shoo all your cares away,
make the bright sunshine stay.
Najam,
Your words, written in lovely and encouraging poetic voice, truly touched my mind, heart, and soul, inspiring that little unmetered poem of my own.
It is such a poem as yours that makes reading feel so very worthwhile … you are a beautiful person on the inside, and probably on the outside, as-well.
Thank you ever-so warmly for sharing You! ⁓ Richard
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
You make me speechless. Thank you so much I liked what you have written. It's so lovely. Thank you s.. read moreYou make me speechless. Thank you so much I liked what you have written. It's so lovely. Thank you so much for reading I am overwhelmed in joy to know that you liked it. ☺
7 Years Ago
What a pleasure you truly are, Najam! : )
Thank you, for expressing your joyfulness of my rev.. read moreWhat a pleasure you truly are, Najam! : )
Thank you, for expressing your joyfulness of my review … hugs to you! ⁓ RJ
You made me smile by this one. Hehe what a great command of words you got there. I felt like it lacks of imagery though. All in all, well done.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
This is just my opinion on smile. I didn't wanted to paint any picture in reader's mind. Thank you s.. read moreThis is just my opinion on smile. I didn't wanted to paint any picture in reader's mind. Thank you so much I am glad I made you smile. :)
This one of your many poems truly resonated with me. Thank you for that. "But please smile, it needs no occasion // I want that smile by which when they look at it they smile." By far some of my favorite lines I have read in a long time. (As a sidenote: Sorry for not having the time to respond to your reading requests recently. Life has been difficult)
-Threads
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for taking the time to read. I hope everything in your life gets easier soon.
Great poem! Smiles can be deceiving, they can be used to hide pain, but at the same time they can brighten someones day if you smile for them, and smiles can be considered both friendly and beautiful. Smiles could be interpreted as fake, real, happy, or a way to say "I'm ok". Smiles are quite fickle in a way, because they could almost mean anything.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Yes you have understood the exact meaning I wanted to convey. Thank you for reading.
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