The Last Son of Merlin
A Book by Alli B
Emrys Johnson thought he was just a normal teen with an odd name. However, when the world is suddenly under attack from a deadly disease, he is the only one who can make that can make things right.
© 2013 Alli B
Author's Note
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Please be critical. I want to eventually publish this, so I need to know what I'm doing right, what I'm doing wrong, and more importantly, suggestions on what to do to fix any problems.
This is a first draft, and all advice will be used to write the version I hope to eventually publish.
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Reviews
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Well, I need chapters. But sounds pretty good so far. :3
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Added on August 25, 2013
Last Updated on August 25, 2013
Tags: Urban Fantasy
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Alli BFalls Church, VA
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Hello, my name is Alli, and I'm here to get feedback for a story I will hopefully turn into a book!
I choose this site because out of all the fiction sites I looked at, this one seemed the most lik.. more..
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