A Roulette Called Love

This is more of a song that my friend Tay and I wrote. It's not done yet but almost.

Love is like a game of Russian roulette,

Take a shot, never knowing what you'll get.

I'm done with all the heartbreak,

Done with all the lies.

No longer givin' out all those second tries.

Famous words I've heard too late.

The only boy worth it,

Won't bring tears to your face.

So girls, let me give you one piece of advice.

Men are like purses, cute, full of crap, and easy to replace.

So never let one bring tears to your face.

 

[[Chorus]]

I'm done playin' Roulette,

I'm tired of not knowing what I'll get,

I'm done with all this regret,

Seems like all the boys I've met,

Have hurt me playing Roulette..

With my heart ,

They tore me apart,

And sent me back to the start.

So now I'm done playing this Roulette,

A Roulette called Love.

 

I loved the way you looked at me,

The way you made me smile.

Things seemed blissfully perfect for a while,

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[NotYourChinaDoll]

I like this....Some of the rhyming seems a bit forced (such as "Done with all the lies. No longer givin' out those second tries") but I like the ideas behind it. As a poem goes, it doesn't flow extremely well. But as a song it might flow. I would have to hear it. I really like the chorus. It sounds like something I could hear on the radio someday from some Avril Lavigne type chick rocking out (sorry if you don't like Avril) .