RED

Dysphoria of Emotions

Life makes one do things thy promised against 

Call it stupid well that would be the topic for another day

The travel of miles

Funny as it sounds

Would be done over and over again

To overcome the ache

The long and the lust

Not to forget the pricking fear

Peeping into a sweet dream 

Gradually turning into a nightmare 

It’s Life fault it’s there

Life should be here

Going through the journey of the unknown 

Loud wails echoes for life’s that took this journey

Life laid flat figuring if it had become death

In a narrow room

Squeezed as every voice sounded like a soliloquy 

Life felt no flesh on its bones

And no bones in its flesh

Life rose and saw red trickling down

But it felt more empty inside

Never to have felt such a pain

How could life inflict pain on life

Sadly, it would come running back again

Hoping to see its new favorite color RED

Author's Note

If you would love to feel several emotions at once, then this poem is a perfect piece for you. Let me know what you feel about it?

Reviews

[Kim S.]

agreeing with DIVYA on this write, nicely expressed emotions

[Dee’s Poem]

Thank you☺️

[Ayvid N]

Life gives pain to life...unceasingly, till the end. The red symbolizes the pain that we bleed. A very vivid, imaginative poem. I enjoyed reading you today.

[Dee’s Poem]

Till the very end, I’m glad you enjoyed reading. Thank you

[William Michael Reeves]

I did feel several things reading this. Pleasure when you turned words back on themselves. Life inflicting pain on life. Intrigue when you used metaphor like life laid flat figuring it had become death. Mysterious word combinations. And I felt Red. Blood Red as I bled your poem. Disturbingly happy to read you!

Billigami

[Dee’s Poem]

Glad my wordings were able to give the exact intended effects. Thanks for the review 🤗

[Lathen Griffiths]

An interesting piece here Dee.

Best wishes

Lathen

[Dee’s Poem]

Means a lot.Thank you.