Oneironaut (Part 1)

Oneironaut (Part 1)

A Poem by Vague
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See, "Whisper Again, DuVaul," for Part 2.

"
Body
Eyes crawl through-
To the place, 
In the rain.
Cleaves burned out,
Pyre assailed ruins, 
Hurtling from his flaws 
Liquid metal noise, crashing-
Churning, from the bottom of these
Mystic heirloom sirens - ringing free.
To wherefore; let time begin:
He walks this sick- -a musing
Skeletal twitch:
Guitars hum - irreverant groans he throws
His comrades' beat spoke prose,
“If all that’s lost: all around,
The nothing sounds; We
Cast this voice to Naeva."
The vocalist moves,
and we're - so proud
When he, how he, the way he
Can only, can never be
This whole dream, he's
-some nothing being.
Soliloquy
"For I am a well of water, -and ice;
A delicate tether of spiraling rain,
Pouring from the center of something
imperfect.
I am a star-crushed fiend;
The never ending stillness
Along the edge of this benighted place.
Darling, go back to sleep before
I'm imagined a monster again.
I could never seem to imagine a man."

© 2010 Vague


Author's Note

Vague
Considering the nature of this, 'series,' I thought I'd share the music I listened to while writing these.

Body: Fussed with this for quite a while. I can only remember that Fairmount by La Dispute, and Never Ender by More than Life were the major inspirations that finally got me to finish it. I want to say I was listening to TV on the Radio when I first got the idea; particularly Lover's Day.

Soliloquy: Fear by More than Life. Fall Down, Never Get Back Up Again, as well as The Last Lost Continent by La Dispute. Spaceman by The Killers.

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wonderful work keep up the great work exalent write

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