Aggrevate

I step out onto the street,

my pocket watch in hand.

Gold and shimmering,

4 'o clock.

A gaggle of women chuckle by,

I tilt my hat.

I glance up at the building above.

A tall building with creamy brick.

I see your face in the pane above.

Eyes to ground. Eyes to ground.

Face up, I head for the door.

Click click my shoes on the floor.

I have arrived,

now what is my fate?

What.. is.. my.. fate.

Reviews

[RAOrourke]

Your words flowed very nicely as it captures the reader and brings you to the scene, not only vividly but also the sounds I could hear as well through your wonderful descriptions. Very nice job.