The Storm Only Takes Away

I decided to mix my personal statement with some other event that happened in life.

Ever since I was born,

I've been inside the storm,

And while the days go by,

More clouds start to form.

The Storm only takes away,

It never ends the next day,

It just won't go,

Its here to stay.

It throws my feelings in to disarray,

I even began to see the world decay,

Its gave me love,

Just to watch it laugh and betray.

Yet if I'm not mistaken,

And my words remain unshaken,

The Storm only takes away,

What I allow to be taken.

Author's Note

If you see something that seems wrong its most likely part of slang since I kind of wanted to give it that feel.

Reviews

[HipsterPrincess17]

Nice poem!

I love the flow of this

Keep writing

Your friend
Lia

[Shadowkai]

I love it, I definitely can relate only I don't feel I have control over what I lose or what gets taken from me, This is a lovely poem and I hope many others will think so too.
Keep on writing,
Shadowkai

[Kietsu Negative]

Yeah its impossible to choose what you are going to loose, but lets just say the storm is daily life. It adds a new perspective.

[Shadowkai]

Yeah it definiteky does