Invisible

Invisible

A Poem by Nabu
"

Look at me!

"

 

Look at me damn it!

Can't you see me?

I am right here in front of your face!

Just open your eyes!

Hello, I am right here!

You can't see me.

No one can see me.

I am no longer hidden,

but still no one sees me.

I can run naked down a hall,

or set a mountain side on fire.

No one sees me.

I can scream in the opera house,

or light fireworks over a college.

No one sees me.

They can't see me.

No one can see me.

I hate being invisible.

LOOK AT ME!

HEAR MY SCREAMS!


 

© 2008 Nabu


Author's Note

Nabu
Being invisible is never fun. Just my opinion on the subject.

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Your frustration is definitely evident in this piece. I like the use of capitalization and punctuation to reflect your anger at being "invisible". Great job! ^__^

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vigorous voice conveying the subject's frustration and irritation effectively.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 3, 2008

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Nabu
Nabu

San Diego, CA



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