Crimson

Crimson

A Poem by NaCl

A crimson petal

Cups the morning dew

Tender as a mother

As lovingly to

A single crimson drop

From the wrist of a girl

Pale as snow

Crimson cheeks

Burn and tighten

Teeth clench

Fists tense

Crimson has so many places

It can travel to

But my favorite place

Is on the cheeks of you

 

© 2011 NaCl


Author's Note

NaCl
Meant to be happy and a bit silly :)

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Awwww!! wow, so sweet and has this romantic feel to it. I love the flow and the imagery here. Beautiful. Great write!!

Posted 13 Years Ago
Really sweet and flows well!

Posted 13 Years Ago
i really like this poem

Posted 13 Years Ago
Cute!

Please mark this constructive, and review me back!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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 Added on November 3, 2011
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NaCl

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