Of course.

 

So unsure

Not knowing

The words not relaying properly

 

No

Wait

F**k

 

I want to say

  tell

 

I need to reveal something

 

The curtain must rise to give way

         To display

         To show in the most spectacular

  The most phenomenal

 

The way that it needs to be shown

 

I want to compare hands

I need to fix your hair

I wish to tell you something                               Lean in a bit closer

 

A brush

A caress

A trip

 

Closer you’ve become

                                    [Accidently, I swear]

 

 

 

I want to tell you

          To help you see

 

I’m not that difficult

I just want a hug

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I’m sorry. 

(Sorry I’m so weak)

Author's Note

I'm really frustrated, haha.

Reviews

[Jim Clarke]

This is experimental and provocative. Well done.

[Jacqueline]

Wow, what inspired this?
As if I need to ask.
Stop listening to your own instructional seminars.

Lovely bit of writing.
:)

[Dani]

I've had feelings like this

Its okayyy to fe-al sa'ad :]

I like it.

[Dietrich von Crowe]

another infamous motumice, hm?
i wonder if anyone else understands the title.

[...]

Lemme guess. Haha. XD

I love this:
"I want to compare hands
I need to fix your hair"

:]