Hello

feelings that i thought would never come back..

Your smile

Your eyes,

It hurts me so.

I see you with her,

In your arms

and it hurts.

It was supposed to be me.

But you were blind and couldn’t see

That I was everything you could ever need.

As I sink down into this sad, sad depression.

I remember you.

And I remember they days we stood together.

And the long nights when we were alone.

We’ve spread so far apart,

You got bored

And started seeking fun

In places where you shouldn’t lurk.

You smoke and drink now.

After quitting when you were with me..

But its all gone now.

The resistance you’ve built up for almost a full year.

Came crashing down on me when you left.

The barrier is open

And my heart is tender and bruised.

I needed you

But you jumped from her

To that girl

And back again

Your smile

Your eyes

Break my heart at hello.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems [please rate and tell me what you think!]

Reviews

[Bullet Soul]

Alrighty, here goes again!! Haha. ;D
I really liked reading this poem! I actually read it over two times, I liked it so much. You put a lot of emotion into this, and that much is obvious to anyone who chooses to read. I think this is another poem that proves that emotions are hopelessly flawed when they are first felt, but somehow immediately perfected when they are first written. There is beauty in the pain felt here, and that makes this a beautiful poem. Thanks for giving me the chance to read this! You're definitely a talented writer!

[*Evelen*]

Wow this is very good. To be broken by someone, and them coming back to you. Hurts more than them just leaving you. Well done.