Disappearing heart.

My friend wrote for me after I started randomly sending words and thinking of a song. She turned it into a poem. This is how I feel.

Hello there to those right there And if you aren’t then do you care? If I go quiet, if I just leave Would you notice, would you grieve? And I don’t mean just suicide Just run away as a surprise Would you feel better if I was gone? Would you realize somethings wrong? Would you be happy, better off? Or would you joke around and scoff? Sometimes I wonder whats the point? This friendship should become a joint Where people care and actually try But sometimes I just want the sky To leave this place and disappear But would it cause happiness or fear?

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[Sami Khalil]

"I just want the sky
To leave this place and disappear
But would it cause happiness or fear?"

A very enjoyable write. Thank you for penning...:)...........