somewhere

somewhere

A Poem by rachel <3

somewhere there has to be

a special someone just for me

a person that will hold my hand

when i leave this land

a joyful spirt that can see

that we could live in harmony

even though i am death

and he would be light

if he will love me like no other

then i will give him a son

and then him a brother

somewhere we would happy forever you see

 

but there is nobody out there for me

i am not to be loved

not to be cried over when i go

because forever i know

that love is for those of life

and i am ------------

 

© 2009 rachel <3


Author's Note

rachel &lt;3
the ------- part means it could be any word for anyone who feels unworthy of love

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This started off one way then seems you =kinda just let it go.....It happens but the piece came out well anyway. Again I can't say enough about the raw emotion you put forth. There always seems to be a little part of you to each piece you write, atleast the two I have read as of right now.

I plan on reading more, I do hope they remain as enjoyable.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This started off one way then seems you =kinda just let it go.....It happens but the piece came out well anyway. Again I can't say enough about the raw emotion you put forth. There always seems to be a little part of you to each piece you write, atleast the two I have read as of right now.

I plan on reading more, I do hope they remain as enjoyable.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NOT TRUE AT ALL!!! Girl, you do not know what you are saying. You are worth it! V certanly thinks so...! Don't say that about yourself!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 7, 2008
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sometimes you need to let go and accept that they're gone. and then there are the times when you let go by accident and then run screaming out the door, down the street after them. THIS is one o.. more..

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