Can't Quite Fit

Can't Quite Fit

A Poem by N.Sevilla
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My response to every "soul-mate-other-half-fate-brought-us-together-I-can't-live-without-you-forever-and-ever" believer.

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We are two pieces of the same puzzle
With our purpose printed on us
But our pictures don't quite match
And our curves and grooves don't fit
But I'm sure if we move a little more
We could ignore the space between us

That's all right that we weren't born 
To complete one picture
I'm not your soul mate, not your other half
Yet it makes our love so much sweeter
That you do not live to love me
And Fate has not planned our future

You could get up and leave 
And I will continue to live
Because you are not my flesh
And that's okay
I'm sure the taste of my self
is not nearly as exotic

We are two pieces that don't quite fit
Too tightly in some parts
In others, a space in between
It comforts me to know 
I'm jammed up closer to you than your soul mate could be
I am lucky to know the space that divides us
Reminds us we are individuals

What makes our love all the sweeter
Is that you don't need me and I don't need you
But we laugh at Fate as we make ourselves fit
Imperfectly
But
We don't give a damn

© 2013 N.Sevilla


Author's Note

N.Sevilla
The flow is a bit sketchy, but hey, it's free verse. Also, I have abandoned punctuation, as you can see (except the one comma) . Because I like words. Not grammar.

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I loved the constant struggle that occurred between the pieces in this passage. The acceptance of both the distant space and cramped quarters were very effective.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for taking the time to review! Yes, a wise person once told me (back when I was .. read more

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I've had this account for several years and I am finally coming back to my writing roots. It's been a joy to write again and look back on my poetry from 10 years ago and see the changes in my life. .. more..

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