The Romantic and the Realist's Orchard MorningA Story by NOSGALADescriptive WritingHe locked his bicycle on the racks,
his face still refreshingly wet from the embracing and visible moistness
of the early morning dew. He stood upright under the brick arched roof
of the terrace, gazing out at the ripe, almost sensual, garden before
him. It
was a small rectangular blotch of vivid green grass, subdued to the
greyness of the morning air above it. Two apple trees rose up, their
nudity only serving to expose the strength of their limbs. And all
around them, on the ground, breaking the green-grey and adding contrast,
lay a wave of pink-cream apples. In that small patch were all the
wonders of an idyllic summer sunset - even more than that actually, it
seemed to him that the apples on the grass were like reflections of
sunset off the foam of ocean waves. He could almost hear it. He
stayed and took in the moment, but only for a moment... And just as he
was about to leave, a tenor-pitched snap followed by a muffled thump
stopped him on his tracks. He smiled at the Newtonian experience and
decided to stand there for a few seconds longer. It almost felt as if he
was in a conversation with nature herself, and she had just begonned
him not to leave. He
let the image boldly imprint itself in his eyes, and, though he did not
know it, in his eyes the reality of the picture acquired meaning in
existence. He left, head held high and mind sailing in the breeze of the
beautiful.
--- The violent clunking of keys broke the silence. With a sudden movement he jerked the door open and rushed outside into the non-claustric
air. The door banged onto its adjacent wall and then started its
creaking glide back to close again. Walking up and down on the terrace
he nervously lit his cigarette. This was his one pleasure, his dirty
escape, and he knew it. The world was slowly killing him and he felt it
was his personal privilege to partake in this crime. But
also, just to be true to the character of this smoker, when he believed
the 'world was killing him', he did not mean that some unworldly spirit
was draining the life force out of him. To the contrary, it was the
normal things that were killing him - it was people and their
expectations, their malevolent smiles and their calculated reactions. He
firmly knew all this - "there is no hope; there is no hope because
there is no god. We are all just accidents, self-interested machinating
organisms. Everything is slime, gutter, and rot." And he knew he was no
exception in this constant never ending fight where the pendulum only swings from overt aggression to hypocritical calculations of peacefulness. Pout.
Suck. Inhale. Swallow. Stay. Exhale, smoke swirling to the golden ratio
as an almost imperceptible wheeze stabs at the air in shrill manic
bouts. He paused a while between drags, inspecting his surroundings. He
was always aware of what was around him - the constant feeling of being
threatened would not have it any other way. But this time, he also took
time to actually notice some of it. In particular, he noticed two sickly
trees that had dropped basketfulls of apples. The
custard-red cream peels made his stomach stir and rise to clutch at his
breath. Against the background of the cement sky, these pastel coloured
fruit reminded him of hospital interiors. At the same time, below this
spread of surface there hid nature's processes of decay. Worms wriggling
within, eating away and forming intestine-like tunnels on their way.
Flies regurgitating and slurping. In addition, the self-destructing
process of maturity and over-ripeness. All together culprits in nature's
war against itself. With
time, soon enough, this hospital scenery would transform itself into a
morgue of sweet swamp mush, the last remains of these fruit. One last
drag and he flicked the cigarette butt into space. Again he looked at
the scenery. In a way it was like looking in a mirror. He breathed
heavily, smoke residue still leaving his lungs and blurring the view as
it slowly rose in almost imperceptible swirling lines. Enough. He slowly
walked back towards the door, opened it, entered, and the door slowly
closed on its own. © 2011 NOSGALAReviews
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