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Hurray for split second sad love poems!

Another word

Another tear

I wonder how

My heart can bare

 

As I speak

You give that stare

Like how can I say that

How do I dare

 

I wasn't given a choice

You chose not to share

The feelings you had

So I don't know if you care

 

You were my yang

A perfect pair

But you left your yin

Without a prayer

 

So with these words

That are only fair

I say goodbye

And leave you there

 

Another word

Another tear

I wonder how

My heart can bare

Author's Note

Eric and I broke up. But I'm not sure if that was the best decision. We needed a serious talk, yes, but breaking up? Maybe I went too far. Well, he has a chance to fix it. I just pray to god he takes it.

Reviews

[i.am.the.sun.]

good job on the form and rhyme scheme, you kept to it well!

[Just Cat]

Aww, this poem is so... sad. It makes sense though.
It sounds like you have been through/or are going through, some pretty tough times. Hope you work things out.
Lovely poem though, very heartfelt.

[Belinda Rice]

All I can say is this is really heart felt and I can understand the pain and yes God will mend your broken heart Just pray he will be there to answer your prayers Just call on to him and tell him what you need and believe that you have the strength to be with him again if needed to be God Bless koodos

[George Love]

Another paragraph in the life of a young girl, sadness, yet maybe some hope in these words. Very good stuff!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

I'm sorry to hear about the break up. This poem is nicely written and I can feel the sadness. I hope everything works out.

Heather

[An owl on the moon]

Framed perfectly with such sorrow, the feeling of love and loss so painfully vivid. I wish the best for you in your life... Really...

Craig