You Suck

Short poem. Finally...lol

I can feel you...

All around me...

 

Poisoning...

The air I'm breathing...

Mocking me...

With what I'm seeing...

Judging...

Al the things I'm doing...

Stabbing me...

With what I'm feeling...

 

I can feel you...

All around me...

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Finally a short poem! =D

Reviews

[trinityluv122]

Awesome, it reminds me of a man treating a woman with utter disrespect, thats how i identify with it.

[M_S_Lay]

I could feel the claustrophobia and defensive emotions rising up in me as I read it.

Very good

[Wolfwind Words]

I think this was a wonderful tale of what a view on society might be!
I imagined society as a cloud of think fog that would swirl around a person, and cause them to have all sorts of issues, such as doubt and the feeling of being alone.
Great Write! :)

[Silent Pacer]

this poem had great rhythm, almost to the point of lyrical. infact, i could picture this as a part of a powerful song. I really enjoyed this poem. i can see myself in it, i have felt this and noted its discomfort.. very nice write.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

good poem.. seems like you are feeling a psychic vampire.. no, some close minded people .. many of those .. this is a good short poem ..
Chloe
xoxo

[Nana Carmine]

Wow, it seems I signed on as you wrote this poem. haha
I really like it though. Short and to the point- sometimes I find I prefer short poems. Especially when the message is so clearly stated. I love it. Great job.

~Nana Carmine