Lullaby

Mmm poem TYM!

Float away with me,

My dear one, my dear one,

To where the angels sing,

And the cherubs play.

A special place,

Where you can always stay.

 

Come away with me,

My dear one, my sweet one.

Let us soar above them all,

And glide to untroubled times.

Let us laugh and play,

Filling our heads with silly rhymes.

 

Always stay with me,

My dear one, my dear one,

For I am forever with you.

I can show you great love,

And we'll fly together,

Into the indigo skies above.

 

Sleep peacefully,

My dear one, my sweet one.

Dream of magic and the stars above.

But don't forget to return to me,

In the next morning,

Fore without you I can't fly free.

Author's Note

I got it a pretty big fight with my friend, and I've just been extremelly emotional lately. Which is odd for me because I am a pro at controling myself, so much that it scares some people. To most people I seem very calm or intimidating but recently I've lost that sense of control... I just wish Eric would talk to me and tell me what happened and why he left out of the blue... *sighs* Well, this poem I wrote I purposefully made it so when you read it, it could be for anyone you know. Family, Friends, Lovers, etc. It just kinda came to me last night... I got 2 and a half hours of sleep so I might just be slow today..

Reviews

[Andreas Pelonis]

I usually like rhyming poetry, but yours is very good. Very deep emotions were obviously the reason this piece was written.

[LostCauze[:P]]

Beautifully written. I really liked the structure, the flow and the repitition of words. On the 4th stanza you spelt Peacefully wrong. But other then that your poem was fantastic. Keep writing.

[Brenda Sue]

To me this would be great to read to a little one as you are putting them to bed. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[Danielle Asher]

i felt peace and love when i read it. I love the flow of it. I'll be honest, I am too depressed to spend too much time focusing on it. but i thought it had a beautiful sentiment to it.

[An Ordinary Woman]

I agree that it has a lullaby feel to it, very peaceful and sweet. I enjoyed it.

I loved these lines...
Let us soar above them all,
And glide to untroubled times.
Let us laugh and play,
Filling our heads with silly rhymes.

Wonderful writing!!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Oh, this is a beautiful piece and really like it. Wonderful write!!!

Heather

[George Love]

Excellent work. This shows your talent and showcases your ability to caputer the emotion of the moment and make it timeless. One of the best I've read today!

[Legion]

Sounds like a lullaby for one's child. I like it that way. Would make a great song.

[JC Fox]

*hugs* there is a lot of drama going on here in the cafe and I enjoy this poem it shows all the emotions that you are feeling.

[huntnteen]

very touching, you did a GREAT job of makeing sure it coulld be directed at anybody not just a lover. it relays the fact that you care for the person and always want them there.