Surname

Jerry..,
What is your last name
Someone asked me in the game..
For me the question was like flame.
Actually, I was unknown for this blame,
Once I heard, the last name belongs to your father,
I had never heard this word any rather.

Once, 'please dont go' my mother howl,
At that time I use to crawl..

Suddenly the chilled and pale air blown,
And that man left us alone.

All were eager to know my surname,
What could I say..
So, I quit the game.

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

A very beautiful write Nikki!
The agony, helplessness and rejection clearly come out in the last line.
You have told a story in just a few lines in this beautifully crafted well rhymed art work of yours.
Take a bow for this amazing write.
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

[Nikki]

Thank you for reviewing and appreciating my poem..