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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
toxic love

toxic love

A Story by NENA^
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I'm really bored so I decided to make a short story. enjoy!

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Your on vacation with you two best friends Brooke and chloe in Hollywood for 2 weeks. On your first day, your exploring the exciting plastic world, filled with celberties just around the corner, tourists crowding all around you, the sweet smell of the ocean breeze and the feel of the warm sun on your face. It feels like a dream. First stop is the hollywood walk of fame. You take turns taking pictures with the stars. Then after 1 hour, the 3 of you go back to your hotel room and change into your bikini's and race to the elavator. "Last person to the elavator is buying lunch!" All 3 of you out of breath rach the elavator at the same time. You go downstaires and when the doors open you see a bunch of screaming girls crowding around the check in desk and taking pictures. Brooke and chloe dont even care and keep walking but the flashs of the camera's confuse you and you walk towards the desk and as your walking, suddenly you see this guy with the biggest and most gorgous brown eyes you've ever seen, shaggy light brown  hair, a purple and white stripped hoodie with the hood up, jeans and jordans walk up to you. You suddenly hear your heart beating louder and louder. Your completly starstruck! He looks at you and smile. he says "oh exuse me gourgous!" in a smooth and cute voice. with that he touches your arm. You move to the side and brooke comes over to you and says " are you ok? what happend?" You catch your breath and try to talk. "I......I......Cute......really......cute......hoodie......exuse...and..ohhhh" You fan your self with your hand. Before you know it, you faint right into brookes arms. "oh jeez." She carrys you to the couch. After like 4 minuets you wake up. At first your vision becomes blurry then it becomes more clear. You hear "are you alright Stephany" Chloe says looking worried at brooke. You get up and scratch your head and say "what happend?" "hun you passed out from beeing so starstruck." "ohh." All 3 of you walk to the beach. you set down your towels,umbrellas, and your radio. When you turn it on, you hear Baby by justin bieber. "Who's this?" you ask brooke. "oh thats jsutin bieber. he's the new teen heartthrob. He's actually pretty cute." She takes out cosmo girl magazine and you see the same guy you met at the hotel. "can I see that for a sec?" You ask her "sure!" You flip through the pages and see his face on every single one. Its either a poster, an article or a quiz. You start to smile. Suddenly you hear his voice on the radio. "ok justin you jsut arrived right?" "yeah." "so how do you like california?" "I'm loving it so far. I met this girl and she was really cute." "ohhhhh so is she your new girlfriend?" "no man, but I want to see her again." You feel your heart beating louder and louder again, you stomach getting butterflies, your face turning a light red. "why are you soo happy all of a sudden?" chloe asks. "oh nothing. It must be the weather." You laugh to your self. "I think this is enough sun for one day." brooke says. You gather up your things and walk back to the hotel. Brooke and chloe go upstaires first and your right after them. You press the elavator button and as soon as you hear the ding and the doors open you see his face.

© 2010 NENA^


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NENA^
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I think it's pretty good so far, more please?
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