YOU N ME

Winds whistling past us

felt so frosty around 

yet so warm between us...

The love birds humming our love song

the liles lulled the moon

The trees bowed

the stream sailed slow...

Me in your arms 

You in my eyes

we drank the love potion

of a rose...

soaked into sensuality

We taped our fairy-tale

amidst a thousand stars

and our prayers for a forever "you and me"

continued to echo in our own hearts...

 

Reviews

[justread]

A perfect ending indeed...great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful words for love.
"and our prayers for a forever "you and me"
continued to echo in our own hearts."
The above lines. Perfect ending for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[NEHA]

thanks...glad that you found this poem a delight
#cheers
;p

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[Govind singh]

Me in Ur arms and u in my eyes...wow such a beautiful poem..loved it:)

[NEHA]

thanks govind...
;>>

[sette]

a beautifully expressed love poem. nice piece of writing

[NEHA]

oh your welcome!
XD

[Dinesh Kumar]

Nicely penned
Beautiful....

[NEHA]

thanks
:p
#cheers

[Brie D]

I love this

[NEHA]

thanks
#cheers

[¿]

Neha your every poem till now is really good at flow and could make the reader imagine the scenario.
This one is also alike such.
Great work you did greater was my read!

[NEHA]

thank you a load ;p