A Letter To Love

all about love

             

Dear love

Ye can be as white and tranquil as a dove,

The darkest forest too scary to travel

or a beautiful scene to marvel.

 

Thou is as unique as a stone pebble

Sometimes ye is short lived liked a water bubble

 

And at times ye linger undamaged for thousand  years

And if destoyed you leave us in tears….

 

You are one but different

Each with its own scent.

 

Ye is found in a mother’s bright smile,

And her baby’s crackling chuckle .

In a father’s watery eyes,

Holding his child’s first salary.

In a grandparent,when they become one.

You are found in a teenager heart

Crushing on the girl next door,

Where the boy is too afraid

To reveal infront of her…..your name.

You are in the air,

Bathing two fervent lovers.

 

You presence is conspicuous

Between a newly wed couple

You bless them with a child

Taking after them.

You are in the angry hand of a teacher

Twister the ear of a student .

 

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Although you have no dimensions

You can create a whole lot of emotions

 

The jealousy of a wife

The anger of a father

The greed of a politician

Our hatred on terrorists

The grief of a widow

Looking out of the window.

 

You bind all forms of life together

Ye make men of different faiths say “Brother!’’

 

Thou can create roses out of guns

All in all, for you the whole world runs…

 

Sans you we become savage

Lives ,properties,and hopes we blindly damage.

 

And for you my darling love,

This silly poem I dedicate.

Thanking you for your treasure trove,

Wishing that you never leave our planet .

 

Your’s forever

Swati Nayak

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hey,readers did you love my poem ?
I would love to read your reviews.....

Reviews

[Devanshi]

I indeed love your poem towards love!! I especially liked it when it almost reached the end...it got so good!!
" Although you have no dimensions
You can create a whole lot of emotions
The jealousy of a wife
The anger of a father
The greed of a politician
Our hatred on terrorists
The grief of a widow
Looking out of the window.
You bind all forms of life together
Ye make men of different faiths say “Brother!’’
Thou can create roses out of guns
All in all, for you the whole world runs…
Sans you we become savage
Lives ,properties,and hopes we blindly damage.
And for you my darling love,
This silly poem I dedicate.
Thanking you for your treasure trove,
Wishing that you never leave our planet ."---these were my favorite!!
Keep Writing!

[Swati Nayak]

happy that you loved it,

[Unspoken poet]

Wow, this is so wonderful, love this write... awesome

[tanmay7551]

Great! and how stupid I was, trying to avoid this piece because of the title! I had been just thinking other way around... My ghost of the past made me ignore this one thinking it may just bring out something that may hurt!

But well done! Love indeed is the reason human beings exist and it can fix many other evils.

[Luna]

that was wonderful even if it was long i could not stop reading . Thank You for this beautiful poem. Keep writing your heart out.

[Swati Nayak]

well the font was big too so it appeared longer...happy that you loved it,

[Ashish]

How can someone find love in so many faces..
But yes ..you do that..
I inspired by your writing ..
Good job swati :)

[Swati Nayak]

Thanks for the review

[Jasbir Kaur]

It's one of the best i have read so far, by describing love in every aspect looks unique .
My best wishes .

[Swati Nayak]

oh my god I feel very flattered thanks

[Shabeeh Haider]

You have caught the essence of love in its various forms.
It is one of the most difficult thing to explain but you have lived up to the challenge.
Love can be all that you have said and a lot more.

[Swati Nayak]

true.....

[Black Cat Fever]

Yes, I do love your poem celebrating love. Wonderfully written and creative. Just as you write, love is all things and everything. It is strong and powerful. Too bad it can't overcome hate.

[Swati Nayak]

Thank you dear

[Black Cat Fever]

You are very welcome.

[Mrinalini R]

Fantastic....really, fantastic... u have explored so many faces that love can take and have drawn a perfect conclusion that without it we become savage... With time, I am sure, a little more abstraction will glow in your pen --- then the stuff will be fascinating.. I appreciate the tenderness of ur heart...

[Swati Nayak]

Sure madam, I hope with time the depth of my poetic expressions will grow...thanks to writerscafe.org and its amazing poets .

[Lalita]

Beautifully written and this poem is not silly.

[Swati Nayak]

LOL ;D.....

[Lalita]

Hehe... very funny :)

[Swati Nayak]

love your dp

[Lalita]

Thanks ;-)