Barren Land

Another song I wrote

//[chorus]

Now I don't wanna know what you doin' though

I'm walking through the snow, so you and I could grow

But I feel so alone, you said I was your man

Now I don't understand, I'm on some barren land

//[Verse 1]

I'm bout to go away, so don't worry today

I'm a runaway, so yeah, today is my day

Longing for yesterday is an earthly pain

Earthly pains haunt me for all my days, longing for better ways

If that's the case then just runaway, I don't wanna get her hate

//[Chorus]

Now I don't wanna know what you doin' though

I'm walkin' through the snow, so you and I could grow

But I feel so alone, you said I was your man

Now I don't understand, I'm on some barren land

//[Verse 2]

I'm drowning all of my earthly pains

I have some chains tightened round my brain

I'm tryin' to explain, but you just complain

So I'm drowning all of my earthly pains

Who wants all my stains, all of my mistakes

//[Chorus]

Now I don't wanna know what you doin' though

I'm walkin' through the snow, so you and I could grow

But I feel so alone, you said I was your man

Now I don't understand, I'm on some barren land

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful flow of thoughts and words.
"Now I don't wanna know what you doin' though
I'm walkin' through the snow, so you and I could grow
But I feel so alone, you said I was your man
Now I don't understand, I'm on some barren land"
I liked the feel of music and the ending in the poetry. Easy to feel empty and barren. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

gripping piece...letting it all out...especially like "who wants all my stains, all of my mistakes"

confessional piece with a bitter tone, and yet hopeful that someone will understand.

j.

[NAHTEWOHARD]

Thank you! Appreciated very much.