Lies

Lies

 

That which was evil’s first breath, was that of a lie

 

That which was evil’s first drink, was that of poisoned wine

That which was evil’s first food, was that of a sweet apple

That which was evil’s first action, was that of a fist

 

But that which was evil’s first breath, was that of a lie

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Powerfully vivid words that span the broad space of time and reveal the destructiveness of a lie... Amazing write.

[KimmiChristine(:]

Great job on this one. Totally portrays a message while keeping it short simple and sweet. :)

[D. Pesek]

I like the Biblical allusions.

[H]

It's very biblical.

[Wolfe Greytome]

I like this. Its short, simple and to the point. Well done.