Honey Crepes

An Iambic tetrameter/ trimeter verse.

Honey Crêpes

The dancing pigeon flew the coop

assaying escapades

he heard that far, in Guadalupe

would meet poetic maids.

Aboard the boat he met three chicks

that loved his tango steps

and one and two they intermix'd

enjoying honeyed crêpes.

Hence honey-spread upon their tips

of tongues affected most

the three that felt the moon eclipse

and their enchanting host.

The stars were blinking in the dark

- small lanterns thrown above -

and in their eyes reflected spark

bestowed on those who love.

Celestial figures they became

egressing from their dreams

thus seagulls heard the maids exclaim

their Anapestic reams.

A pigeon of the honeyed dance

aboard the pepper'd sloop

experienced a chic-romance,

en route to Guadalupe.

© 05-06-2015, G. Venetopoulos, All Rights Reserved

(Iambic tetrameter / trimeter)

Author's Note

I am kindly asking the other members not to edit or revise (reorganize) my poem(s). Benevolent comments, though, are always welcome. Thank you.

Reviews

[Georgios]

LHh: Thank you for your kind commenting! I'll read your poems, too, later on.

[Autumn Lyric]

Most enchanting verse, Georgios. Your words are as skilled as the dance...Thank you for sharing.

-LHh