ME

don't take away my kindness

don't take away my love

don't take my smile for granted

for you should see the other side of me

 

so coldhearted so unpleasant

so careless on how you feel

so i strip away your heart

leaving you souless

as i up raise to the better part of me

 

im caring im sweet & sometime give my all

which means im genuine and loyal

something to be cherish & never forgotten

 

i leave a memory everywhere i go

making you feel more connected as before

im neutral im what you may think

but im all i am which is me

Reviews

[KAREN]

Being you is what it's all about!! Great job expressing just that!

[Julialeiona]

I Like this!! I don't know how to rae, so I won't... But for me, it is really good.

[alan khan]

last stanza was pretty powerful. nice work.

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. When someone allow you in. The good and bad can be open up. I like the description and the ending was perfect.
Coyote