No Goodbye's

Even though your gone you're not forgotten..!

The stars in the sky let me know your their shinning

as and angel watching over me guiding me threw life..!

 

My heart is shatterd but this is not goodbye

You've got your wings now fly..!

God's brung you home to stay as you wait for me

every night i pray..!

 

That oneday i'll see you again which i know i will

when god calls me home itll be a thrill

Even though your gone temporarly i will not cry

 

Because its a celebration you did not die..!

You just went away for while

You're still here with me right by my side

 

Helping me control my pride

my insucreites

Im to young to love

that you thought me

 

Thats one thing have to remember about you and me

I wont say R.I.P because there is no peace in the world

But i will say Rest with Pride

that you've made me who i am..!

Author's Note

I put dots and explamations to show the signature of my writing

Reviews

[BLACK PRINCE]

This is really deep

[nigrum homonculus]

"I wont say R.I.P because there is no peace in the world
But i will say Rest with Pride" my god that line is beautiful. its so truthful but so sweet. well done. best poem i have read so far

[forevermore1218]

I really admire your work in this poem. It reminds me a lot of my own poem fly angel fly, but yours is far better! This is really touching and I think that the path you're going down with poetry is the right way. This is, I think, your best poem that I've read.

Keep up the great work!