alone

Alone with no one by my side.

Alone with no one to  love.

Alone with no one to care for.

So i cry day an night to let out 

the pain an sorrow that was kept 

inside for centuries i never told anyone

my feeling that i locked away.

Cause i know that no one would listen 

or care but i know that these feelings

would take over me, but what more can i 

say what more can i do? 

i send so many signs that show my feelings 

inside.

i draw an i write i put all my talent in my 

work to reflect what i kept inside but 

no one cared no one listened no one saw 

they just took one look an turned their heads 

away.

So im alone in this world writing an drawing 

out the

screams an cries of what i feel inside, to

hopefully one day that someone will 

finally see an i wont be alone anymore.

Reviews

[Ballpark Frank]

Oh man! This is stirring and emotional. Well done. Very sad.

[Ashley]

thank you an ya wrote this when i was in high school lol

[ron]

I feel the same way. It's hard sometimes.

[Ashley]

yea it is but guess i have to deal with being alone lol

[ron]

I know the feeling.

[Ashley]

yea i know

[ron]

You have a good heart Ashley. Anyone would be lucky to have you in their life.

[78Jon]

I'm alone too. Hopefully you won't be alone forever. Me either.

[Justin]

that was really great :) :) :) u were able to get alot of emotion across in short form :) :) amazing job :)

[Ashley]

lol thanks glad you loved it

[Justin]

your welcome, u are really great writer :)

[Ashley]

thanks i try lol im working on another poem right now trying to put it together lol