I Can't Believe You...

I Can't Believe You...

A Poem by Mina

I can't believe you left me crying in the rain.

I can't believe you lied to me leaving me much pain.

I can't believe you didn't care about me.

I can't believe you stopped loveing me.

I can't believe you were cheating.

I can't believe it because you made my heart stop beating.

I can't believe im still reminiscing.

I couldn't believe you were my everything.

I can't believe I gave you my heart,

when in the end you decided to depart.

I can't believe my thoughts

of you are fading.

But here I am still waiting.

The years pass.

And I still think

                                    you're an a*s.

© 2010 Mina


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love the rhyming , but u need to write in a poetic form like the way u typed it ,it looks like a story


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