Nothing

Nothing

A Poem by Mysty Rayn

I am not who I want to be

Cause I am nothing without you

I am not who I once was

Cause I am nothing without you

 

 

You fill the hollow in my heart

You light the dark of my soul

You numb the pain of my past

You brighten my future

 

You make my heart beat

You remind my lungs to breathe

You can summon my smile

You open my eyes

 

 

I will never be complete

Cause I am nothing without you

I have never been whole

Cause I am nothing without you

 

And I am without you....

© 2011 Mysty Rayn


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The feel of song lyrics...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love a poem or story that comes full circle. Your talent lies in making your reader feel the emotion you were feeling as you wrote it. You manipulate us and take us where you want us to go. It's a terrific quality for a writer and one I wish I had.

Your final line? Brilliant.

Posted 13 Years Ago


When the love that exists within our hearts is awakened by another it is very hard to let that individual part. Unfortunately in the journey of life those that we have a strong affinity with sometimes require a different path to complete their journey.
Love comes when we least expect it! Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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