Butt Out

Serious Venting....

 

Who do you think you are

to look at me and judge?

I stay in my own little spot

and mind my own space.

You think just because you have nothing better to do

It's okay to mess with my small space in this world?

I'm a nice person

But I must be a flirt.

I call you sweetie

and I automatically must be lifting up my skirt?

Give me a break

Worry more about yourself

You do plenty wrong in your own life

that needs mending

You need not pick at mine

Reviews

[Spat Queen]

I couldn't have said this better myself. Wow, I really love to be supportive of people who stand up for themselves and I just think this piece really says it all about the way people can be so quick to judge a person and what is truly frightening about it is that the judgemental people who do this often will go to great lenghts to justify what they want to see as opposed to dealing with the reality what is really actually the case. Amazing piece.

[darkgurl]

nice vent write, well written...Kim

[Kristin Brecoe]

good job. this was a clear poem that had some attitude. people shouldn't assume, they should always make sure what they say is right in order to make judgements. (Everyone makes judgements.)

[soulsearching]

DAMN


Nice, your are having a bad day..

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[Leo Gems]

Standing up for yourself!! You go girl! :p I hope you have a better day!
No one should judge until they are in the same pair of shoes.. :p
Fabulous ink!

[jkhatz]

I don't know a single soul who wouldn't love to be able to vent and rant to the person causing them anguish, the way you have here.

Rants are healing... nothing's better than venting with a keyboard at your fingertips. I hope it has helped your Thursday become a better day.