Butt Out

Serious Venting....

 

Who do you think you are

to look at me and judge?

I stay in my own little spot

and mind my own space.

You think just because you have nothing better to do

It's okay to mess with my small space in this world?

I'm a nice person

But I must be a flirt.

I call you sweetie

and I automatically must be lifting up my skirt?

Give me a break

Worry more about yourself

You do plenty wrong in your own life

that needs mending

You need not pick at mine

Reviews

[Spat Queen]

I couldn't have said this better myself. Wow, I really love to be supportive of people who stand up for themselves and I just think this piece really says it all about the way people can be so quick to judge a person and what is truly frightening about it is that the judgemental people who do this often will go to great lenghts to justify what they want to see as opposed to dealing with the reality what is really actually the case. Amazing piece.

[Wildecat]

Really liked this poem, there are always going to be people who have nothing better to do than stick there nose in someone elses business. I liked how you in a nice way told them to take a hike. This poem made me smile (Thanks Mysty)

[the_ese]

f**k yes.

[Laura E. Aranda]

innocent banter...haha I have to agree cyntax
I haven't been by to read you lately so I just had to come read your new ones...cheers,lea

[Brianna Brie]

You do plenty wrong in your own life
that needs mending
You need not pick at mine

You wrote this one spot on!! What more can I say...you said it all. Great job!!

[☮]

There is nothing worse than someone misconstruing innocent banter for seduction. It can be emotionally draining to go through times like this. It's sad, because everything is open for interpretation. You communicated your frustrations at someone forcing you to have to change your otherwise peaceful demeanor, because of their immaturity. Very well expressed. Impressed.

[Arthur Henn]

Well written and well said in such an artistic way.

I honor you in what you have written here.
and admire the way you penned this.

Art

[LadyLove]

Whoa! True and honest write at its finest! Nothing like a fierce pen-stabbing! You keep it going girl...let the ink flow out of his cyber-body!!! Take care!!

[Dani California]

Well said my friend! Yes, so many are quick to judge, instead of taking care of their own lives. It's tiresome really. Let it drift past... blah.... blah..... poof! Gone. ;) I don't know the circumstances, but whatever they are, don't let it get to you dear.

Nicely written!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Way to go... damn I hate people who spread vicious rumors.