I really enjoyed the picture that you painted (and I don't just say that). I always ask poets, though, to tell us readers how to read their poems. That's what the punctuation does for us. You wrote the poem, so you know exactly how it's supposed to be read. You know where all the stops and pauses are. We do not. The punctuation gives us that information. That would be my only input, otherwise, I feel your poem is letter perfect. Every word in place, and fufilling it's purpose beautifully.
I really enjoyed the picture that you painted (and I don't just say that). I always ask poets, though, to tell us readers how to read their poems. That's what the punctuation does for us. You wrote the poem, so you know exactly how it's supposed to be read. You know where all the stops and pauses are. We do not. The punctuation gives us that information. That would be my only input, otherwise, I feel your poem is letter perfect. Every word in place, and fufilling it's purpose beautifully.
This is so beautiful, the wonderful images of a crisp fall day where everything is tranquil and the earth seams at piece is astounding... but then again you are an amazing writer.
love the imagery you have put into this piece .... very peaceful and the flow is perfect on this ... nice job on this one and thanks for all your reviews I owe you some...:)
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