Moment

 

Let me escape to you

Even if it’s just for a moment

If it must be just a dream

Allow me to fall into your arms

To feel safe again

Even if it’s just for a moment

A second

I need to know I can be loved again

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I have no idea what I'm doing tonight... Just writing whatever comes to mind.

Reviews

[Blemish In The Stars]

I really like the simplicity of this poem but, it is anything BUT simple. Love is the most difficult thing we as people deal with. One thing we definately have in common as a whole is we want it. This poem in all it's "simplicity" is the quintessence of this desire. We all want love and this poem spoke volumes to me. I definately empathize with this one. Great read and great message. Thank you.

[Greg Skura]

I love this!!! so smooth and sweet!!!! To love and be loved, is the souls' true nature. Thank You for sharing!

[THE LOST ROSE]

I hope you have had and will have some other nights when you do not know what you are doing? This was amazing, powerful but yet short. It speaks volume. To impact thoughts with so little words is truly a special gift. Thanks for sharing your gift with us (readers).

[Michael X]

This is beautifully written Mysty, has a sentimental feeling that reciprocates
the emotional reflection, moment".. desiring in love a moment that seems to
last forever, I like the way you use minimal wording to capture multitude,
sweet passion has a way of flowing straight to the readers heart, Nicely done.

[Lyrical Love]

Amazingly tender, fresh, quiet, and true!!!!
I found myself in this bowl of chicken noodle soup.
Well written.

[Lily1111]

Vulnerability beautifully expressed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We all have that need to know someone can care for us so deep it's just human nature and those who say they don't are lying... I love that you openly describe your feeling showing us not only you are human but a sweet and sensitive one at that.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Well not know what you're doing has taken you to a lovely place where love resides.

Nice soft write and felt gently in the heart.

[Imperfection]

...and you have no idea how grand the outcome is.

Keep writing.

The last line was amazing.
Escellent poem.
I'm taking it to my favorites.