My Heart

My eyes never saw the real you

But my heart did

My ears never doubted what you said

But my heart did

My body lusted for you

But my heart never did

 

I should’ve trusted my heart

 

-Mysty Rayn

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

Very well written
The heart is an amazing piece
of work

Great work

Orlando M

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Matters of the heart can be complicated like walking on a razors edge... especially in the ways of love... a very nice expression of how one can mess up even with the best of intentions... boy do i know how that goes.

[Loribeth215]

Uh oh....

[Blue Sky]

Short and right to the point,
such wonderful poetic piece

My ears never doubted what you said

But my heart did


the lines that really speak out to me, yet
the whole piece does as you created
a great poem here, well done!!