Dungeon

Deep in the dungeon of abandonment

 

 

Chained to the walls of insecurity

 

Tortured by fear

 

Sentenced to life

 

 

Wrongfully accused

 

 

Reviews

[Antony]

Usually when someone wrongfully accuses, they don't believe it is wrong in their mind, they usually feel they have a legitimate reason for this kind of action, maybe they mistrust too much and there may be a reason for that as well, something in their past may direct them toward mistrust and so eventually one or the other can no longer bear the hurt, and so they try to part from each other, that is when we feel abandonment, helpless and insecure. Alot said in just a few short sentences, all your writing is very cut and dry, easily to understand and that is a good thing.
Antony

[Last Lying Look]

This was very neat. Short but to the point, which made it amazing :)

[.:Naiira Harlow:.]

Good, but not enough emotion in this poem. I just can't feel it even if it does use very powerful words

[James K. Blaylock]

This is truly a powerful piece, and it's written in so few words - which makes it's impact that much deeper! Most of us can relate, sadly...

jkb

[The Mad Prophet]

It makes you feel trapped a bit. You create in such short words what it's like to be in a dungeon, and what I like about this poem is the Short Words, because when you are in a dungeon there is not much to see or do. You captured that well. Very well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ahhh yes to be accused of things you do not do maybe by past reputation or loose talk among others... a short but powerful write.

[Paza]

Maybe it's just the mood I'm in tonight, but I really feel this. So short, but cut straight through ... "chained to the walls of insecurity"...it hits me where I live right now.