Secret

You are my soul mate.

I am certain of that.

The way you laugh.

All the smiles you have made me smile.

 

You are my friend.

My best friend.

The way we talk.

Knowing I can’t go a day without your voice.

 

You are my lover.

My greatest love.

Whenever we make love,

The whole world stops turning for us.

 

You are my other half.

The part that makes me whole.

I could not bare a day without you.

I love you more then my words could ever tell you.

 

Unfortunately, I can’t tell you

I can’t tell anyone.

I am married, but not to you.

Shhhh

It is a secret.

 

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

Author's Note

I wrote this through the eyes of a friend who was recently caught cheating.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh nice and lovely ,unfortunately i can not tell you,i can not tell anyone,i am married but not to you,end of quote,so nice ,i love those stolen moments of pleasure they are,they are sweet because they are not ours,we are not allowed such luxury ,society rules ,but that what would make them even more sweet ,so just hush up and lets keep our stolen moment for secret ,tell me you will not tell ,i wont tell,i just loved this,specially the sudden turn at the end,very nice as usual

[Adela Muresan]

Kowel :).
I really don't know if you meant for the ending to be funny ( with the schhh and the married stuff ) or if it's sad because you weren't able to wed your loved one.
The entire poem inflicts a feeling of warmth.

Anywayz great confession :) .

A.M.

[Antony]

This is great Mysty, we all have a secret of some sort, but your secret has been revealed, so it is no longer a secret. I believe that at times we really would like to reveal our secrets, just to get a reaction from people. Secrets are baggage that we carry through out our lives and until we can get rid of the baggage, we forever will have to look over our shoulder. I like the surprise ending.
Antony

[Lewis Findley]

Lovely write dear friend

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Nice job the aura of secrecy.

The whole world stops turning for us.

This line is beautiful, I remember having a passionate love that did make the world stop when we made love. I guess when you have an affair and you are in love the precious momnts mean the world.

Great write.

[soulsearching]

if only this was about me.. hell i think that all of the men on here would love to be married to you

great job as always

[Wicahpi]

Thank you for your entry into "The Secret" contest! This is a wonderful poem, even with the twist at the end. Nice Job! Good Luck!

[Lori]

Very cute and filled with mischief. Gotta love that!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh dang you really got me with that ending... what a sweet and loving piece then bam you pulled the rug out from under me... I must have bumped my head cause I am dizzy now, LOL

Seriously that is good.