Moonlight

Moonlight

A Poem by Mysty Rayn

Within the moonlight we dance

Caressed by stars we smile

Embraced by the wind we kiss

Enchanted by night we fell in love

 

 

 

© 2008 Mysty Rayn


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Enchanting! Your words flow beautifully, and the imagery is powerful and breathtaking. The night is really a beautiful time if we just let ourselves experience it. And no matter how well you think you know it, the night sky will always surprise you with the dust of stars, waves of silver moonlight, and chilly winds. You've captured it all perfectly in four simple lines. Bravo! :D

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really love the sentiment and your choice of words for this piece, it really draws one into the moment. Just a thought that maybe there could be some space between the word "we" and the word before it, it seems like this would be read with a slow pace to extend each moment as to make it last forever and we is the word with the most impact.

For example:

Within the moonlight
we dance

Posted 16 Years Ago


An elegant and romantic poem. Beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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This is just beautiful:). This is my favorite line: Caressed by stars we smile

It's simple and elagant....AD

Posted 16 Years Ago


This poem reminds me of the night my now fiance told me he loved me. This is such a short, but beautifully sweet poem. I really enjoyed it!!! Love under moonlight speaks mountains to my ears.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such simply strong words of love in such few words... just like the moon love has a undeniable power.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very well done!

Brief and expressive. Nice choice of words that relate human 'caressing', 'embracing' and 'enchanting' with that of nature. I like it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short simple ,like its building up ,its kind of exotic too ,i really loved this

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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